progFX
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Post by progFX on Nov 14, 2003 15:06:50 GMT -5
Hey made a while ago and still working hard at it heres the mockup for a first person shooter game it may get into a game may not either way im proud of it   |
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Post by Murdoc on Nov 14, 2003 16:05:26 GMT -5
Nicely done. Good colour choice, i like how the hand looks. Finish it up.
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Post by boob on Nov 14, 2003 18:33:22 GMT -5
nice! but why wont you take my advice?
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Post by Frank Jaeger on Nov 14, 2003 18:36:58 GMT -5
Everything looks really good except for maybe the arm. It'a bit too straight. I think it should be bent a little near the elbow.
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Post by ScubaSteve on Nov 14, 2003 23:17:45 GMT -5
Very nice, you should be proud. The one suggestion I would make would be on perspective. I would bring the gun closer to the center rather than it being so far to the right. It would require a complete redraw however  |
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Post by anachronoks on Nov 14, 2003 23:32:15 GMT -5
Everything looks really good except for maybe the arm. It'a bit too straight. I think it should be bent a little near the elbow. The elbow isn't even visible. Also, if you're ever fired a gun before, you know you hold your arm straight out, to aim and compensate for recoil. |
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Gerry
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Post by Gerry on Nov 15, 2003 10:51:11 GMT -5
The elbow isn't even visible. I was just about to say that. Where's your elbow? |
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progFX
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Post by progFX on Nov 15, 2003 12:21:32 GMT -5
Thanx for all the comments, i plan to finish it up very soon.
Scuba Steve: Yeah im probly gonna try that on my next weapon pegwo wants me to make a plasma gun or was it jawsh i cant remember any way thanx.
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