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Post by diced on Dec 1, 2003 11:46:05 GMT -5
ok pixelation has been down for a while... my computer is so full of art that has not been posted anywhere. so: ![]() pixelerate.org/vampire06diced.gif[/img] i am still keeping some of it for pixelation because i fear lack of constructive feedback at the temp forums, since there are a lot of the people i admire and respect for their way of handling feedback, who does not come to these boards. oh well, i like the piece myself, i hope you do. comments would be cool; thank you for your time! |
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Post by diced on Dec 1, 2003 11:57:01 GMT -5
sorry for the double post, i forgot to warn about nudity... if there are any moderators out there please add a nudity warning the title of my post. i can't since i am a guest.
thanks.
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Post by inkspot on Dec 1, 2003 12:14:28 GMT -5
Hey, thats awsome! Nudity is awsome too ;D
Nice light coming.
Idea is good too. Good work. Nothing to say.
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Post by Graga on Dec 1, 2003 12:15:53 GMT -5
I told it to you on MSN: Bad boob job, move the nipples  Sexy! |
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Post by diced on Dec 1, 2003 14:07:10 GMT -5
boob job...  thank you for the feedback so far. |
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Post by nvision on Dec 1, 2003 14:58:36 GMT -5
nipples don't point straight ahead on breasts, but rather at angles away from each other. The one on the left should be below the silvery bits on the breast, and the one on the right should be shifted just a little more inwards. Her collar bone is also a little wonky...it looks really sunken in below the bone, and the swirly bit on the right is confusing...there should also be a depression at the base of the neck where the two bones meet above the sternum (where the side muscles of the neck meet).
The colouring is awesome, and the cross-shaped highlight in the eye is a nice touch! I'd bring the lighting down a little more on her arm so it doesn't look amputated, though..
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Post by diced on Dec 1, 2003 16:41:48 GMT -5
thanx for the thoughts nvision and yeah i know female breats arent like that in real life (cept maybe some silicone), but hey its hentai and i like them.
yeah i think it would be a good effect to make the colours (cept the eyes) darker... i will tweak a bit around.
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Post by Ultim on Dec 1, 2003 16:48:43 GMT -5
...Is that a lock of hair on her chest?
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Post by FrankJaeger on Dec 1, 2003 18:58:58 GMT -5
No silly, that's the silicon seeping it's way out of a rather large pore.
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Post by ciprofloxacine on Dec 2, 2003 8:33:00 GMT -5
Waow, amazing art diced. What's wrong for me ? well, I don't really like the colour of the blood. I mean, blood is dark and gets even darker when there is no light. In example, in black and white movies people used coffee to have the right effect. Here, the art is not monochrom but still i think it should be much darker.
Personal taste only : I think the teeth are too long (or maybe strangely placed). I'll try to look at it closer on my computer...
love the eyes, hair and macaroni (yeah, it could be jungenstyl with some more of these)...
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Post by junipero on Dec 2, 2003 19:36:14 GMT -5
cute  i think the teeth could use work... it looks like she's holding a bit of fringe in her mouth. i'd either make them spaced out a tad and angled in (frame the bottom lip) or else open her mouth more so the teeth look like they are inside the mouth rather than seeping out over the lip. |
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