mik
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Hi!!
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Post by mik on Sept 29, 2003 16:02:16 GMT -5
I need [glow=red,2,300]c+c[/glow] on this  I dont know if i got it right or not! I dont like the AA maybe i shud get rid of it. I also hate the arms.. but i am proud with the design,,i drew it first at school here is the 16x16 sprite  wich is supposed to go with it.. its for a gba game which me and a friend are designing all edits and comments very welcome also ideas too:D thx for any help  |
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Post by xanthier on Sept 29, 2003 22:16:00 GMT -5
The pose is not balanced, he'd fall straight over, also I's suggest adding some highlights, and I'm not sure the head's perspective is correct, i like the character though, and it's a
big art piece, maybe it doesn't need to be so big for that level of detail, i suggest making it smaller and 2xing it.
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Post by 0665 on Sept 30, 2003 18:59:35 GMT -5
Hmm.... looks like a pokemon.. sorta heh
He looks imbalanced because his legs are too forward, suggestion: move them back, closer to the center of his body, you know, the center of gravity thing
His arm... lacks an upper, lower, elbow, and shoulder; the NECCESSITIES of an arm heh (well, unless you want to cop out and say its artistic choice, though sometimes, that's a pretty valid excuse.. heh)
His head isnt correct, perspective wise, as xanthier said, shrink the top left and his left eye
No other real crits on it
As for the small sprite, gba..hmm.. I would suggest a 32x32 version for the ability to add more detail, but it looks fine at 16x16, except that it looks more like its sliding than it is walking, can't really help there heh
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